One adjustment.

The creature things need to follow better. If you move away too much, they'll all of a sudden stop. Fix that, and it's much better for impatient people like myself.

Yeah.

This is fantastic.

Sounds like

Sounds alot like Lounge Act during the verse. Well done, definitely some Nirvana influence. The drums were good. Now you need vocals!

Great :D

I love this song. xD I even used it in the beginning of one of my videos (on youtube) (It made it sound very epic). Great work. The riff was catchy. The sound quality was really good too. Are the chords, A, E, G, D?